academic shoot

 

these were the only two photos of mine that i liked the second one does good with rule of thirds, lines and avoid mergers i should have fixed the background. the first one which i prefer does well with simplicity, lines, framing for his right half and balance but i messed up with the lighting causing the shirt to merge with the floor and i should have tried to get the other kids head in as a rule of thirds and blur was obviously a problem in the photos.(i know that i need to get three or more but i only saved these two before i knew we needed three) in the first photo the focus is the kid in the checkered shirt and in the second one it focuses on the kid in the purple shirt. I think it is very clear what the subject is in the first and somewhat easy to find in the second picture.